Sounds like an ending to a larger work, derived from something written during “one-hour compo” while on IRC with some demo/tracker/sceners who are way better at this stuff than I am.
Month: March 2007
Intro – WIP
Sounds like it’s becoming the beginning of a greater work, and stands on its own rather well. I hope people that have heard this one in several revisions are enjoying it. The changes made to this one are a bit more obvious than the last, but still quite subtle.